I really enjoyed this story's soft and gentle narrative. The beautiful portrayal of Tademise and Olamilekan's love story had me completely invested. I felt like a silent observer, witnessing Olamilekan’s emotions firsthand. The poems added an extra layer of depth, conveying the pain, regret, and anxiety that he felt so effectively.
I read the ending- the part where they were at the bar while listening to LMLY, and it made that part come alive more.
The writing was raw and real. Well done and welcome back , sir! This is a perfect 'back like I never left' story for us, your readers.
Thanks Mojirade for your thoughtful comment. I am glad the story was as beautiful to you as it was to me. I look forward to writing more stories as beautiful as this. They'd be reflections of our shared humanity and lived experiences. It's good to be back.
Every lines and words speaks to me softly and differently, because I was able to grasp the quiet struggles of both lovers and how communication with poetry is efficient.
Thank you so much, Sir.
I'll gladly look forward to reading beautiful stories from you. 🧎♂️
I really enjoyed this story's soft and gentle narrative. The beautiful portrayal of Tademise and Olamilekan's love story had me completely invested. I felt like a silent observer, witnessing Olamilekan’s emotions firsthand. The poems added an extra layer of depth, conveying the pain, regret, and anxiety that he felt so effectively.
I read the ending- the part where they were at the bar while listening to LMLY, and it made that part come alive more.
The writing was raw and real. Well done and welcome back , sir! This is a perfect 'back like I never left' story for us, your readers.
I look forward to reading more!
Thanks Mojirade for your thoughtful comment. I am glad the story was as beautiful to you as it was to me. I look forward to writing more stories as beautiful as this. They'd be reflections of our shared humanity and lived experiences. It's good to be back.
"Life has a way of circling back, not to what you lost, but to what you left too soon."
This had the most impact👆
Yes, life is often like that. I am glad it had the impact it did. Thanks for reading Yisro'el.
This is so timely and unveiling.
Thanks for this beautiful piece, sir.
Will surely come back to this!
The depth in these lines lingers… not just read, but felt.
Welcome back sir, This is such a beautiful piece!
Thanks for your kind words, Mercy.
I'm glad you found the story impactful
Wossh, But life has a way of circling back, not to what you lost, but to what you left too soon... This is timely, I got the message. Thank you, Sir
More Insight and welcome back, Sir
Thanks Rhoda.
It's good to be back.
This write up is so amazing and touching too. 🥹🥹
I am so glad you found it touching and amazing.
This is really beautiful, Sir Israel.
Every lines and words speaks to me softly and differently, because I was able to grasp the quiet struggles of both lovers and how communication with poetry is efficient.
Thank you so much, Sir.
I'll gladly look forward to reading beautiful stories from you. 🧎♂️
Thanks for your kind words, Temitope. I am glad you enjoyed the piece. Let's look forward to more beautiful beautiful stories from me.
This is a very beautiful piece, Pastor Israel
I am glad you enjoyed it, Godsdesire.
I am glad you enjoyed it, Godsdesire.
I am glad you enjoyed it, Godsdesire.
This… is so beautiful. There are no words to describe the depth of this piece. Thank you so much for writing.
I am glad you found it beautiful, Dorcas.
This is so beautiful 😍
You can feel the love intertwined in every word and line😊😊
Thanks for your kind words, Felicia. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Well written sir, I hope this is your personal life narrative..
Thank you Daniel...every fiction has elements of non-fiction in it.
'Yet every departure, no matter how thoughtful, leaves a mark: a subtle absence that reminds you of what once was'
Hmm… this runs deep. Deeper than one might think.
It was such a beautiful read. I genuinely enjoyed every part of it. It made me think about love again, in a calm and hopeful way.
I am glad you you enjoyed it and that it rekindled beautiful emotions. Cheers